“Love you,” I whispered, feeling this helplessness strangle me into silence. “I won’t let go” I gasped, while it ripped you away from my hands. “Don’t give up” I cried, as you cowered in the dark corner. “I won’t leave you!” I screamed, when God split us apart. “Don’t leave me... “ I mouthed, and the void swallowed the space where you had just been. H. Newcomer 2009* |
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Another something I found in my wanderings through my writing.
It's rather terrifying and depressing....the the thing is I have no memory of the where and why of it. There is usually something that causes me to write, and in this case it must of been something largely sad. I don't know....I do know that I like it, in the sense of it being a poem.....hopeless or otherwise, there is a certain sense of beautiful desperation and loss inside it. |
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o well
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the anatogonist makes the protagonist stronger
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